Friday, April 5, 2013

Unfinished Short Story - For the Heck of It


       Another short story. Except, this one's not finished. I don't know if I'll ever finish it. It was just turning out to be too long for the assignment. Anyways. It doesn't have a title right now. All I had for a title was the prompt for my Creative Writing class. Character is Fate.  

            I guess I should have seen this coming. Once someone gets into this life, they never get out. Unfortunately for me, this is the life I was born into. Constantly on the move, playing this sick, twisted game. It’s only a game when you aren’t a part of it. From the inside, it’s a vicious cycle that consume every part of every day. It never ends well, but it always ends. I guess if you believe in heaven and hell, there’s a fifty-fifty chance that it could end well. I doubt that anyone who’s part of this life makes it to heaven. I think we’ll just leave one hell for another. This is the life I was born into, knowing that I’d die in the game I never wanted to play. This is the fate that I am facing now.
We call ourselves the Shadows. We are all pieces in The Game. Both names were given by outsiders who wanted desperately to be a part of the lifestyle that I would give anything to leave. We are the Shadows because we race all around the country, do various jobs, and leave—all in the dead of night. The Game seems to have no real beginning and no hope for an end. There are rumors that it started years ago when a multi-billionaire with no children and a sick sense of humor was writing his will. He left an untold fortune to the victors of the game. I don’t know if any of the stories are true, but people believed them. My parents did and that’s why I’m here.
The jobs we are assigned are random and usually illegal. We get a new task the evening after we finish the previous one. The rules are simple: 1) Read your task and don’t share it with anyone outside your family; 2) No one is allowed out during the day. Travelling and completing of tasks must take place when the sun goes down; 3) finish your task exactly according to your instructions. If any of the rules are broken, well, that’s when people can finally leave the game, to whatever comes after this life. Also, since it’s somewhat of a race, the last person to do what they’re assigned in the certain period of time… well, things don’t end well for them. I don’t know what happens to those people; I just know that we never see them again. Since we get our new job the day after we finish the last, we never really get to rest. I don’t know how we get the instructions. All I know is that they show up in little white envelopes while we are sleeping.
            We got our most recent envelope two days ago. We had just finished a trek from Cincinnati, Ohio, to El Centro, California, to pick up a package and deposit it in an unmarked cargo van. Like any time we finish a certain task, I just hope that maybe our next message will tell us to rest for a few days, or that we’ll wake up to nothing. And just like always, that wasn’t the case. The instructions on this card were different than any other we’ve had before. Usually, our jobs are laid our step-by-step, exactly as we are to complete them. This time, there was only one simple line:
St. Matthew’s Parish. Kalispell, MT. 4 a.m.3 days.
            “But why doesn’t it tell us what we’re supposed to do?” I asked my mom as we were leaving the cheap motel. The Game pays for everything somehow, but they definitely don’t splurge.
            “I don’t know, but it doesn’t really matter. We’re going, and we’ll find out then.”
            As I threw my duffle bag into the car, sullen and confused. I couldn’t shake the feeling of impending doom. I told myself that it’s just the nature of the game, and I tried not to think about what could be waiting in Montana. I turned up my iPod and tried to drown out the voices in my head shouting at me to run. I closed my eyes to the city lights, and faded into dreams of what a normal life would have been like; dreams of high school football, parties with friends, and a real life.
            When I opened my eyes, we were just pulling into the rest area of some Podunk town in Idaho. The sky was turning blue with the dawn, so we had to stop for the day. I’ve always wondered how the people who run the game know where we are and if we stopped for the day. I can’t imagine that we are followed or spied on with tiny cameras, but with how twisted the Game is, I don’t put anything past them. Since I slept all through the night, I was looking at a day of being awake in the back seat of a car, not able to even go out and walk around the town. My parents both fell asleep quickly, though. Leaving me to my own silence and wondering.
After a few hours of sitting in silence, I couldn’t take it anymore. Screw this stupid game. I had to do something. Besides, this town was all but a ghost town. What could possibly happen? I could walk around the town and back to the car before my parents could possibly know I was gone. They were good at sleeping during the day; they had been doing it since before I was born. I was sick of being afraid that The Game was following us and knew our every move. I felt it was time to challenge that. I figured that if they caught me, it just meant that I would escape the game faster than expected. Maybe a little suicidal, but at that point, I didn’t care. I was 17 and had been in The Game my whole life. I had no friends to miss me, and my parents… well, I loved them, but let’s face it, and they are the ones who dragged me into this lifestyle. They couldn’t possibly care that much if this was the life they chose for me. My life wasn’t much of a life, so its value was all but non-existent.
I was good at being quite. Everything we did for the tasks required sneaking around. Silently I opened the door, slid out of the car, and shut the door behind me. My parents didn’t even twitch. I was free. I couldn’t believe that I actually did it; that I was brave enough—or maybe stupid enough—to go through with it. All I knew was that I had an hour or two of freedom. To be out on my own in broad daylight. It was exhilarating. I set off across the rest area parking lot and into the tiny town. Although it was just a little town in the middle of nowhere, this little place represented a whole new world to me; if only for just a few hours.
This dusty little town might have looked like nothing special, but to me, wandering around on my own for the first time, it was a treasure chest. The sky blue water tower that I saw from the road stood by a lazy little creek running through the middle of town. Main Street made a loop around town, parallel to the Union Pacific railroad line. It crossed over the creek twice: once by the water tower, and once by the football field. I could almost smell the small-town spirit that would envelop that field for a homecoming game. A field of cows watched me as I idled along past the elementary school playground. How many memories had children made over the years on those swings? How many best friends had been found on that jungle-gym?
It was beautiful. This little town, surrounded by sage brush and a horizon of mountains, was so simple, but so much more than I had ever had. It was so silent, compared to the cities we usually do jobs in. The only noises were natural, happy. The whisper of Idaho wind through the trees, a child’s giggle as she was pushed by her mom on the merry-go-round, and a dog barking at a chattering squirrel. Simple noises, but the happiest ones I had ever heard.
Soon I knew that I had to get back to the car, before my parents woke up. Yanked from my blissful daze into the reality of impending doom, I finished the loop around town; past a little café and the only gas station for 40 miles any direction. I took one last forlorn look back at the town. This little Podunk town would forever hold anything good in my memories. If I ever could manage to break free from this game, this twisted way of life, I think I would come back and live here. Maybe I would go to college first, or maybe I would get hired on as a ranch hand.
I had entertained my desires for a real life long enough. Shoulders hard and my face devoid of any emotion, I walked back to the car. Inside my head, however, I kept the happiness that I had felt today. I didn’t notice the black car parked a few spaces away from ours. Once in the car, safely and quietly. I finally noticed it. It was a black sedan with pitch black windows and small chrome accents on the doors. I couldn’t remember, but it seemed as if this car was familiar. It was, more or less, a fairly nondescript car, but I could have sworn that I had seen it before.

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